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Not your best work, this one, I have to say. The plot is kind of dragging on the same place, with some signs of life at the end of the book. The sex scenes were casual m/f, nothing cool or nasty. And my criticue, about the causal M4/Freak4 models still stands. I'm losing track of who's who, because they all look the same. Make some changes on them, get some pre-made charactes, or wrap some of the crazy creatures in the plot. Looking forward to see you back at your full speed, mate.
Starting the year with a bang, I see. Can't wait to read it.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work, mate.
Not your best work, this one, I have to say. The plot is kind of dragging on the same place, with some signs of life at the end of the book. The sex scenes were casual m/f, nothing cool or nasty.
ReplyDeleteAnd my criticue, about the causal M4/Freak4 models still stands. I'm losing track of who's who, because they all look the same. Make some changes on them, get some pre-made charactes, or wrap some of the crazy creatures in the plot.
Looking forward to see you back at your full speed, mate.
Thanks for the critique, nevarran. I appreciate you taking the time to comment.
ReplyDeleteAnother fine story. Thanks!
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